Gibson Acoustic John Lennon J-160E Peace Acoustic-Electric Guitar

This my 32nd dialectal journal

The Gibson John Lennon J-160E Peace Acoustic-Electric Guitar is replica of Lennon's 1962 J-160E, which he used extensively in films and recordings. The reissue features an antique natural finish, laminated spruce top, ladder-top bracing, a P-90 pickup, authentic wood body binding, and a signature truss rod cover. It perfectly re-creates Lennon's Gibson axe as it appeared during 1969's Bed-In after stripping off the psychedelic paint job he commissioned in 1967. It's historically accurate right down to the strap based on the one John used. The original Gibson guitar is now displayed in the Rock and Roll Hall of Fame, and this re-creation is offered as a limited, numbered edition of 750, each with a Certificate of Authenticity from Gibson.

My feedback:

There is a certain amount of attraction toward this guitar just because John Lennon used to play a guitar just like it.

Peavey HP Signature EXP

This is my 31st Dialectal Journal.

Named after Peavey's founder and CEO, Hartley Peavey, the HP Signature electric guitar is the ultimate refinement of the playability, tone, style, and technology Peavey has developed over the past 39 years. The Peavey EXP is built on a solid foundation, using the finest selected woods, hardware, and pickups for brilliant tone as well as a distinctive, unmistakable appearance.

My feedback:

With Peavey coming back with guitar after a long vacation of not showing anything new but amplifiers, it is nice to see something come of a sudden happening.

Brian Setzer Signature Nashville Guitar

This is my 30th Dialectal Journal.

Updated with trestle bracing, nickel-plated hardware, and TV Jones Classic pickups, the Gretsch Guitars G6120SSLVO Brian Setzer Signature Nashville Guitar now precisely matches Setzer's stage guitar and his personal preferences. The adjustable bridge with ebony base and a bound, ebonized rosewood fretboard with thumbnail inlays lend vibrant visuals. A 16" rock maple action-flow neck, Gretsch Bigsby vibrato tailpiece, 3-way pickup selector, master tone switch, plus master and individual pickup volume controls are all finishing flourishes on the Gretsch Brian Setzer Nashville Guyitar. Gretsch included a hardshell case with the G6120SSLVO Guitar.

My feedback:

Life has special turns and Brian was that turn in life. This guitar turned the century from rockabilly to 80s rock.

Jackson PC-1 Phil Collen

This is my 29th Dialectal Journal.

The Jackson PC-1 Phil Collen USA Electric Guitar boasts a quilted maple top and compound-radius flame fretboard to provide visual appeal that's as captivating as it is original. A double-bladed Sustainer humbucker up front sings it sweet and quiet, while a DiMarzio HS2 in the middle and DiMarzio Super 3 at the bridge dish out that signature Phil Collen chunk and screaming sustain. The Jackson PC-1 has a mahogany body and quartersawn bolt-on maple neck. Original Floyd Rose double-locking trem. Jackson includes a hardshell case with your PC-1 Phil Collen Guitar.

MY feed back:
This is a good paragraph but it is like all the others with nothing special.

Fender Artist Series Mark Knopfler Stratocaster

This is my 28th dialectal journal. Mrs Zeller can you email me? My email is strictlyrock@hotmail.com


The Fender Artist Series Mark Knopfler Stratocaster Electric Guitar lets you play the same guitar as the Sultan of Swing. Perhaps the most distinctive guitar voice in the last 30 years, Mark Knopfler has worked with Fender to create a signature axe that combines all his favorite features. A comfort-contoured '57 lightweight ash body, vintage tinted '62 C-shaped maple neck, Texas Special single coil Strat pickups, and American vintage vibrato provide all the sparkle and bite that makes Mark's tone so unique.

My feedback:

There is not very much to tell about this paragraph but that it is great with a good subject to be written about.

Fender Artist Series Buddy Guy Polka Dot Stratocaster

This my 27th Dialectal Journal.

Available for a limited time only, this is a must guitar for the Buddy Guy fan. It shares many features with the Custom Shop version. Solid alder body. Soft V neck shape. Fender/Gotoh vintage-style tuners. Vintage-style synchronized tremolo. Medium-jumbo frets.

My Feedback:

This is NOT a good selling paragraph. It is to short and does not tell you why you should buy the guitar.

Fender Elvis Costello Signature Jazzmaster

This is my 26th Dialectal Journal.

The Fender Elvis Costello Signature Jazzmaster is a faithful reproduction of the electric guitar Elvis used on his 1977 debut album. Costello s original guitar has gone through many changes in the past 30 years, and this Jazzmaster faithfully replicates the guitar as it existed at the time he recorded the acclaimed My Aim Is True.

My feedback:

This paragraph is like many others. Professionally written with a little twist to interest the reader. Yet it is like all others, a little bland. Yet how could one write one that is better?

Dunlop JH-1B Jimi Hendrix Signature Wah Pedal

This my 25th dialectal journal.

The Jimi Hendrix Signature Wah pedal reproduces the famous tones of Hendrix wah solos and rhythms from the late 60s. The guitar pedal has a classic vintage look to match it's sound: a chrome top and black crinkle aluminum body. Dunlop does it again with great sound and solid construction.

Now for my rendition:

Do you have every single album of Jimi Hendrix that there is? Do you also have a guitar just like his and an amp to match it? Yet you feel that something is complete in your collection? Here is what you were missing...a Jimi Hendrix signature wah pedal by Dunlop. Don't miss out and get one now.

Alex Lifeson ES-355

This is my 24th Dialectal journal.

For 33 years, Rush guitarist Alex Lifeson has personified the consummate rock innovator a sonic adventurer capable of producing mind-blowing power chords and dizzying arpeggios alike, ultimately sculpted into huge, rich melodies and ingenious arrangements. Throughout most of Lifeson s ride to superstardom, a 1976 Gibson ES-355 has been by his side, both in the studio and on stage. With it, he has created many of Rush s breathtaking layered soundscapes, and the very same ES-355 continues to be an indispensable part of his live arsenal. This Gibson electric guitar is a painstaking recreation of the iconic instrument. It's Gibson s heartfelt tribute to a true modern master, and to the guitar he used to expand the definition of popular music.

Now my feedback:

This is a great paragraph with a nice subject and way of writing.

Elvis Costello Century of Progress Signature model acoustic

this is my 23rd Dialectal Journal.

The Elvis Costello Century of Progress Signature model acoustic is fashioned after Costello's beloved 1936 model; it is a painstaking recreation of his favorite acoustic, used to record and perform many of the songs that made him the iconic musician that he is. Culling information from photos of Costello's treasured instrument and the original blueprints from the 1930s, Gibson Acoustics' team of master luthiers were able to successfully reproduce every attribute of Costello's prized acoustic with flawless accuracy and immaculate attention to detail.

Now for my feedback:

This paragraph is great. with an awe inspiring way of writing, this author draws the attention of all.

Eric Clapton signature Stratocaster

This is my 22nd Dialectal Journal.

The Fender Artist Series Eric Clapton Stratocaster gives you awesome pickups, sweeping tones, excellent action and a super comfortable neck. Fender's Vintage Noiseless pickups were Eric's choice for updating his signature model. Powerful active mid boost (+25dB) and TBX circuits give it even greater tonal versatility. Alder body. V-shaped neck. 9-1/2"-radius fretboard. Blocked original vintage synchronized tremolo bridge. Made in the U.S.

Now for my rendition:

To havethe sound and the look of the great Eric Clapton you need the guitar that Eric plays. Now is that time that you can havethat guitar. A replica made in the U.S. with all of the extras that Mr. Clapton himself would use on his Strat. Now you can buy it for only, $1529.99. So order yours now!

This is my 21 first dialectal journal.

Summers played number one of the 250 replicas when the Police once again electrified the music world by reuniting on Feb. 11, 2007, to open the 49th annual Grammy Awards ceremony in Los Angeles. Even more exciting, Summers will play the replica during the momentous 2007 30th anniversary worldwide Police reunion tour, one of the most hoped for and eagerly awaited events in pop music history. It promises to be a thrilling musical event featuring one of rock's most innovative guitarists playing a spot on replica of one of rock's most distinctive guitars.

Now my feedback:

This paragraph is great with a wonderful subject and the author has a great way of writing and he gets right to the point as I will on this one.

Brian May Guitars Brian May Signature Electric Guitar

This is my 20th Dialectal journal.

The Brian May guitar is faithful to the spirit of Brian's original 'Red Special', an instrument that has achieved iconic status and a unique place in rock history, and designed by Brian May himself. The Brian May Special is a stunning guitar, blessed with superb build quality, awesome playability and an astonishingly rich diversity of killer tones. In fact, it delivers everything you'd expect from an instrument built to the exacting standards of one of the world's greatest guitarists but, in keeping with Brian's vision of a "guitar for the people", with an amazingly affordable price-tag that belies its' superior appointments and performance.

My Version:

Many would say that to be a guitarist you must have a guitar. Brian had that and more, he didn't have to sign a piece of paper to have a signature, he just made a completely custom guitar. A guitar that is like no other guitar. Until now, now you can have e a Brian May replica. The guitar that turned eyes and the century. Guitars will never be the same after this guitar.

Angus Young signature SG

This is the 19th of my Dialectal Journals.

The Gibson Angus Young Signature SG is a faithful reproduction of Young's trademark axe! It's exact, even down to the worn engraving on the Lyre Vibrola tailpiece. Mahogany body and neck, 22-fret rosewood fingerboard with pearl trapezoid inlays, single-bound neck, nickel hardware, a '57 Classic humbucker (neck), an Angus Signature humbucker (bridge), and devil graphic on headstock. Definitely a guitar that's made to rock "all night long."

My feedback:

This is a great paragraph with an awesome topic and concluding sentence. Though I do NOT like AC-DC this is a cool guitar. Yet again this is a "nice" paragraph and is written well.

Joe Satriani Signature Ibanez

This is the 18th of my dialectal journals.

If fast solos and sweet tone are your thing, you'll love the Ibanez JS1200 Joe Satriani Signature Guitar. It took Ibanez many years to create guitars that would satisfy the Master of Tone, and the result is superb! Precision-sculpted basswood body is light on the shoulder with otherworldly looks and great high-fret access. Its vibrant resonance is translated into endless sustain through DiMarzio humbuckersÿ ÿa PAF Joe at the neck and a Fred at the bridge. Screamin' fast JS Prestige maple neck features smaller 6105 frets and tighter radius on a rosewood fretboard. Dive bomb with aplomb on the Edge Pro bridge.

My Feedback:

Now this is more my style of a advertising paragraph. Though yet again the only problem is that there is not a concluding sentence. Though other than that there is not a single problem.

Steve Vai Signature Ibanez JEM7V

This is the 17th of my dialectal journals.

The Ibanez JEM7V Steve Vai Signature Electric Guitar is a top-of-the-line 6-string solidbody capable of exploring the most extreme sonic territories at any speed. The 5-piece maple/walnut neck is super-smooth for easy riffing and incredibly strong and stable with a lead-friendly thin and flat profile. A 25-1/2" scale and bolt-on neck joint get you lots of bass and treble response with a quick, precise attack. A 43mm nut provides comfortable string spacing and 24 jumbo frets deliver greater range while the recessed tremolo provides right-hand playing comfort and allows notes to be radically raised as well as lowered. The alder body produces clear, full-bodied vintage tone that serves all your needs from chunky rhythms to searing leads. A trio of screaming DiMarzio Evolution pickups (humbuckers at the neck and bridge with a custom single-coil in the mid position), coupled with Split-5 wiring give you all the tonal diversity you crave. And of course, there's Vai's signature Monkey Grip on the bass-side body wing.

My Feedback:

This is a great paragraph with a wonderful topic sentence. There is only one weakness in the paragraph, and that is the concluding sentence. The sentence doesn't conclude. It just stops like you hit a brick wall going fifty miles per hour. Though other than that this is a good advertising paragraph.