This is the thirteenth of my dialectal journals.
Playing this Dean Hardtail Electric Guitar is like a dream date with gorgeous twins. The guitar's deeply quilted maple top looks incredible, especially in this body width to accommodate the two necks. Both C-shape necks are set and feature the ultra-comfortable molded heel and rosewood fingerboard. Excellent balance makes this double-neck guitar comfortable even during long sets. The Dean humbuckers sound great with both the 12- and 6-strings. 3-way pickup selector for each neck, Grover tuners (minis on the 12-string), tune-o-matic bridges, Dean tailpieces, nickel hardware. This Dean double neck guitar is made in a limited run of 200.
This is a wonderful paragraph with exquisite word use. Again this is a paragraph that gets straight to the point. No fooling around just blow fooling around out of the water. I have seen better sales pitches to write about but this is a great paragraph. Though I don't think that Dean guitars are of exceptional playability, sound or looks, but this one is a good one with a shocking look with a exceptional design. I don't know what I would do if I personally had a chance to buy this guitar. I do know that any guitar that was given to me(as in for free)I know that I would take it. Who would not take a guitar that was free. No matter what kind(acoustic or otherwise)I would take it. No matter what brand I would take it. So all in all and through all any guitar that is free I would take.
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Shane, your paragraph here wanders! Read it aloud to yourself. In the first part, you have a run-on sentence; you repeat yourself; then you wander into an unrelated idea.
What if you started your paragraph with a question like, "If I had a chance to buy this guitar, would I do it?" Then make your argument against it: why it might not be the right guitar for you. Follow that with an argument for buying it, drawing on the qualities in the copied paragraph. Conclude with something like, "I wouldn't turn it down if it were given to me; but at the current price, this is not the guitar for me.
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