Plug in-Rock Out

This is the third of the Dialectal journals. This one is about a new item on retail by Vox amps.

Introducing amPlug - the headphone guitar amp that lets you enjoy serious guitar sound, fast. Jamming late at night? Don't want to wake the neighbors? Maybe you want to work out a lick with your mp3 player without taking the time to set up your amp. AmPlug is the answer. Simply plug this palm-sized headphone guitar amp directly into your guitar, and enjoy serious guitar sound anywhere, anytime. It's even available in three different sound styles: VOX AC30, Classic rock, based on a UK-made amplifier head, and Metal, based on a California-made high gain amplifier head.

Yet again the writers of these pieces stun me with their brilliance. The topic sentence is wonderful, bringing out the best in Vox sales pitches. The following sentence is not great if you were writing a paragraph for school but it is okay. The same with the third sentence. This whole paragraph is great after those two. though it is a sales pitch to try to get people to buy their product, and it is successful to me.