This is the 15th of my Dialectal Journals.

Stevie Ray Vaughan was not yet a star on his 26th birthday, Oct. 3, 1980, when his wife, Lenora “Lenny” Vaughan, gave him a used Stratocaster guitar that had recently caught his eye in an Austin, Texas, pawnshop. Though already a phenomenal guitarist, many still viewed him as “Jimmie Vaughan’s little brother,” which was perfectly OK with the easygoing young musician.

MY FEEDBACK:

Though this is not a complete paragraph it caught my eye. So as a fan of SRV I couldn't resist. This paragraph gives you a clearer view on SRV's personality. For a three sentence paragraph one can not say much other than it is put together well.